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'Finished' another one, not sure if it is actually finished but i like how it looks right now so thought i'd submit it : )
Would love to hear some feedback!

Edit: changed the length between the eyes which was abit too much, and i didn't like the signature so changed that aswell ;p
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Mood: Joy ~YoyoKikoChan Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a very nice picture :) Although here are some things I would work on:
Adding more volume to the face, and by that, I mean more shadows and highlights. Right now, it looks very flat.
The eyes. Now, they're wonderful on their own, don't get me wrong, but I think if you're going for a more realistic look, the eyes would be smaller and closer together; eyes aren't at the very tip of the face!
And if you're going for the look without the hair, I would definitely clean up the edges because it gives it a more purposeful look rather than unfinished and rough.
I love the lips, though, and overall, the face (esp. nose area) has been beautifully painted :)
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~Pupsie Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for that! And indeed i noticed yesterday how the face was very flat, compared to the features of the face. And yeah i've always gone for realistic'ish looking eyes and i know where they should be placed but for some reason i liked having it different for once, to me it gave me a abstractish feeling. I didn't clean up the edges because i love messy work :p Anyway thank you so much and i'll see what i can do to improve my next works :aww: x
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~YoyoKikoChan Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, no problem at all :D
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